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Query & Proposals Package

$100.00

Submitting to agents or publishers requires more than strong writing—it requires clarity, positioning, and precision. These services are designed to help you present your work professionally and competitively, while keeping scope and expectations clear.

Query Letter Edit — $100

A focused, strategic edit designed to strengthen clarity, hook, and market positioning.

Includes:

  • One complete edit of your query letter

  • Line-level and structural feedback

  • Suggestions to strengthen premise, stakes, and voice

  • Guidance on clarity, tone, and industry expectations

  • One follow-up polish on the query letter

Ideal for writers who already have a draft and want to sharpen it for submission.

Book Proposal Edit — $800

A comprehensive editorial review of an existing book proposal, with market-focused feedback.

Includes:

  • Full editorial review of your proposal

  • Written feedback addressing:

    • Concept and positioning

    • Structure and organization

    • Competitive titles and market fit

    • Voice, clarity, and professionalism

  • Clear, actionable revision guidance

Ideal for writers who have a complete proposal and want expert guidance before submission.

Book Proposal Creation & Writing — $2,500

A high-touch, collaborative service for writers who want a professionally crafted proposal built from the ground up.

Includes:

  • Strategic development of proposal structure and positioning

  • Writing and/or rewriting of proposal sections, including:

    • Overview

    • Market positioning

    • Competitive analysis

    • Author platform section

  • One collaborative revision round

Limits:

  • Proposal only (does not include manuscript editing)

  • Based on information and materials provided by the author

  • One primary proposal direction (no multiple positioning approaches)

  • Does not include agent outreach or submission management

Ideal for authors pursuing traditional publishing who want a polished, market-ready proposal without guessing how to present their work.

A Note on Fit

These services are designed for writers who are ready to approach the submission process strategically and professionally. If you’re unsure which option is right for you, we’re happy to help you choose the best next step!

Service:

Submitting to agents or publishers requires more than strong writing—it requires clarity, positioning, and precision. These services are designed to help you present your work professionally and competitively, while keeping scope and expectations clear.

Query Letter Edit — $100

A focused, strategic edit designed to strengthen clarity, hook, and market positioning.

Includes:

  • One complete edit of your query letter

  • Line-level and structural feedback

  • Suggestions to strengthen premise, stakes, and voice

  • Guidance on clarity, tone, and industry expectations

  • One follow-up polish on the query letter

Ideal for writers who already have a draft and want to sharpen it for submission.

Book Proposal Edit — $800

A comprehensive editorial review of an existing book proposal, with market-focused feedback.

Includes:

  • Full editorial review of your proposal

  • Written feedback addressing:

    • Concept and positioning

    • Structure and organization

    • Competitive titles and market fit

    • Voice, clarity, and professionalism

  • Clear, actionable revision guidance

Ideal for writers who have a complete proposal and want expert guidance before submission.

Book Proposal Creation & Writing — $2,500

A high-touch, collaborative service for writers who want a professionally crafted proposal built from the ground up.

Includes:

  • Strategic development of proposal structure and positioning

  • Writing and/or rewriting of proposal sections, including:

    • Overview

    • Market positioning

    • Competitive analysis

    • Author platform section

  • One collaborative revision round

Limits:

  • Proposal only (does not include manuscript editing)

  • Based on information and materials provided by the author

  • One primary proposal direction (no multiple positioning approaches)

  • Does not include agent outreach or submission management

Ideal for authors pursuing traditional publishing who want a polished, market-ready proposal without guessing how to present their work.

A Note on Fit

These services are designed for writers who are ready to approach the submission process strategically and professionally. If you’re unsure which option is right for you, we’re happy to help you choose the best next step!

“Mary was wonderful! She was willing to answer my endless questions and so helpful. I used her query package, and the booklet included is magnificent. Her notes were wonderful, and she helped me turn my story pitch into something impressive. I'm proud to start presenting it to agents.”
~ Moriah Chavis

“Mary was amazing! She provided amazing feedback on my query letter package and industry information. I would recommend her to anyone!”
~ Kristain Branham

“Mary's edits on my query and one-sheet made everything professional and concise, and the workbook has many helpful resources. I would recommend this package to anyone pitching a book who isn't quite sure where to start, or needs a refresher in querying."
~Haylie Hanson